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that fits my mood perfectly so i guess il should jump on this one first and then on life story
i know that you can make this better so go on naoghw do it naoghw
anyway great track man, keep it up
.:Z:.
Author's Response:
lol id love to here what u can do with this track man
and ya i just finished it now so u can remix it whenever
K-Dm
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ok im neutral as always and im review this on my personal taste and on the productions site
Good Things:
-Melody, i really like the brass melody its relaxing, simple and basic, sometimes less is more
-Drums, simple hip hop drumline, nothing can go wrong with it, but il go through the details later
-Specials, there are no specials like a silent moment with a reload sound and a shot, or anything,nothing, these days its a must in battle to use a little break, a special a little moment of''thats why you lose this battle''
Bad Things:
-Melody, it isnt made for a battle, the whole track isnt made for a battle so i guess you just uploaded some experiment or an unfinished song
-Drums, yup they are simple and nothing can go wrong with a simple hiphop drumline, but if you really want to win a battle then you need heavy drums, its hard to let it count as a bad thing, because a hard drumline wouldnt fit to this track
-Tag, the tag really seems to be random and out of place
overall a pretty nice track, but if you upload such a track for a battle then its your fault when you lose, because aeradynamic is the clear winner of this round
he put effort into his track and made an overall really cool beat
keep it up, much respect
.:Z:.
Author's Response:
okkkaayyy zajeeedddddd.
so u wanna say i lost cuz of my easy drum line and not battelish sound...wasnt hes drumline easyer, i mean i had 4 diff type of kicks, after erry melodie ending i had a kick drop...
didnt found anything mean in hes beat i mean..nuthin meaner that the piano loop sample XD.
but if u think that way then i casnt do anything, my hands are tied. but thanks fo ya review anyway. ill drop sumthin bigger next time.
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ok im neutral as always and im review this on my personal taste and on the productions site
Good Thing:
-The Drums coming hard and the kick really fits the mood dont know why everyone is complaining about the kick, the Clap could be a bit crushier
the hats aren ot really hard, kinda soft but they fitting to the drums pretty good, they could be a little louder
-Sample or not, you used the sample pretty well, you filled the backround pretty good, and you used a pretty good synth that fits to the violin, with a simple but interesting melody
-Effects and Voices, the choice of the vocals are really good, and you used them at the right places, the effexts were overall great
Bad Things:
-The Gun effect sounded kinda ''cheap'' dont know, you could have thrown a heavy reverb on it maybe that would have make it better
-Sample, its a cool sample and you used it pretty good like i said, but its not really original, i dontk now but you should try a Decent Fast Dist on it, or Overdrive that could make the sample harder
-The Part at 49 seconds sounds pretty ''lonely'' when the sample stops, you could chop the sample and use it as string hits to fill it a bit more
overall really good track
you sampled andt you made it original
you are the winner of this round(i dont know if there is a round 2 lol), this beat is better for a battle beat then g-styles beat
i like your beat overall better, it fits more my style and my type of music
keep it up
.:Z:.
ne 8 wegen dem sample und weil die drums etwas härter hätten sein können
darum keine 10, aber irgendwo gibts immer was zu meckern :P
Author's Response:
Yap Clap was kinda Problem :/ HiHats vol was lowerded cause I didn't want the to make the Beat sound static. Just some noticable, structured Hats, nothing more. Yeah yeah I know (dammit sample)... I just like it too much XD I need to learn some new techniques for editing samples, repeat that beat quick, slice it up, cut that sample down, experiment - I wanted to have a more less dramatic part so I left it out twice. The reload was sliced up and seperated on two different steps to play it as kinda buildup for the epic hit / kickdrum spot,
Thanks for being constructive and voting real :D
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il guess il jump on it, and make my own remake if you send me the file
so i can remake it
good work tough
keep it up
.:Z:.
Author's Response:
LOL YES
ill definitely look forward to it
i wanted to do some hardcore overlays myself... but u alrdy know how my laptop is lol
im sure if u get ur hands on this ull take it to a whole new lvl of epic like u always do haha
K-Dm
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thanks for stealing from vtz, just look at the soundclick page from vtz
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i only could make it good because this whole thing was already amazing
check out our first collab and now this, we got better lol
anyways keep up your amazing work man
.:Z:.
Author's Response:
lol thx man
but for real my original layout for this song was pretty basic
and ur magic turned it so pro
always a pleasure working with u man
K-Dm
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it was hell nice and fun to work with you man, u fuggin talented bastid lol
im thinkin about to remix this like a mix between orchestra of heaven and historic moments, but im lazy lol
i hope we collab again to make a next epic track man
keep up your amazing work, much love
.:Z:.
Author's Response:
Bro... Shut the hell up... You own me on these beats... lol It was an honor!
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man u always amaze me with ur talent man
may the best man win
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ye N.G has some good new talents lately, and im sure there are coming more
and you should have called this track deja vu, if you know what i mean
anyways nothing new, no tips to make this one better its already great how it is, if you want something uniqie then you have to know what unique means and you know it
keep it up good luck in the future
.:Z:.
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You for one... I'm a big fan of your music man... Keep it up...
-Cajete
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im so sad im gonna cut myself,wryyy it hurts lol
you didnt even told me that yuo uploaded it lol, fun to work withyou as usual
next collac? k thanks
Author's Response:
lol ya i did
its even in my msn msg history haha
06/05/2008 7:17:46 PM [K-Dm] [Kyle Martin Manoza] Zajed http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/142133
06/05/2008 7:17:52 PM [K-Dm] [Kyle Martin Manoza] Zajed
maybe i screwed it up i dunno lol
neways ya fun workin wit u too
lets make something more epic next time lol
K-Dm
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